高考英语书面表达典例(带详解)

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1.假如你是李华，你的美国笔友John 对刚进入的高中生活不太适应，请你写信告诉他你的想法，内容要点

如下：

1. 鼓励其广交朋友；

2. 积极参加体育活动，强身健体；

3. 努力奋斗进入理想大学。

注意：1. 可加入一些细节，使文章更加通顺合理；3. 词数100左右（信的格式已给出，不计入总词数）

【答案】Dear John,

I'm so pleased to hear that you've been in Senior High School. And maybe you need a couple of months to adjust yourself. Here are some good tips for you.

Firstly, a life without a friend is a life without a sun, so why not make a lot of good friends and enjoy helping each other? Secondly, we can take an active part in sports in our spare time so that we can get into shape, which will surely be good for our further study. Besides, it's our duty to study hard to make sure that one day our dream of entering a key university will come true.

I believe you'll get used to it soon and wait for your good news.

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】这是一道应用文写作，要求学生以李华的名义写一封信给美国笔友John，就他不适应刚进入高中生活不太适应的问题发表自己的看法。内容包括：1）鼓励其广交朋友；2）积极参加体育活动，强身健体；3）努力奋斗进入理想大学。写作时，考生要选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。根据对题目的分析可知，审本文主要使用一般现在时来写作，描述时，学生要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。

2.假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地音乐厅要举办中国音乐会。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容

包括：(1)写信目的；(2)个人优势；(3)能做的事情。

注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

【答案】Dr. Sir，

Hearing that there's a concert concerning Chinese music will take place at the local music hall, I intend to apply for the position of a volunteer.

For starters,

due to my insatiable curiosity associated with Chinese folk art,I apply to be a volunteer in the hall during my su mmer break in London. In addition, I was born to have the capability to conduct people,

and therefore my strength lies in organizing. Last but not least,

since the visitors coming to the music hall are on a national scale,

it is my duty to maintain a normal order throughout the concert.

Judging from what I've stated, you're bound to have a gist of it.

But words fail to convey my sincere gratitude if I were chosen to become a volunteer in the music hall.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】【思路点拨】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点短语】

1.take place发生；

2.due to由于；

3.apply to应用；

4.in addition除此之外

【高分句型】

1.Hearing that there's a concert concerning Chinese music will take place at the local music hall， I intend to ap

ply for the position of a volunteer．

译文：听说有一场关于中国音乐的音乐会将在当地音乐厅举行，我想申请志愿者的职位。（现在分词作状语）

https://www.docsj.com/doc/2515491366.html,st but not least, since the visitors coming to the music hall are on a national scale, it is my duty to maintain a

normal order throughout the concert．

译文：最后但并非最不重要的是，由于来音乐厅参观的人是全国性的，我有责任在整个音乐会期间维持正常秩序．

（since引导原因状语从句，it是形式主语，不定式内容是真正的主语。）

3.假定你是李华，你校学生会创办的你最喜爱的《英语月报》（English Monthly）向读者征集意见。请你

给主编写封邮件，内容包括：

(1)自我介绍：(2)说明该报优点：内容丰富；指导英语学习；

(3)提出建议：多介绍中国传统文化及励志故事。

注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear editor,

___________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Editor,

I'm so glad to give my personal opinions on my favourite newspaper English Monthly set up by the Students' Union. I'm a high school student who has been exposed to English for 8 years and is enthusiastic about reading newspapers .I want to learn something from the newspaper.

I think English Monthly has many advantages. For one thing, it's rich in content, ranging from economy to civilization. For another, it's a guide to English learning. By reading it, I can have a good knowledge of what's going on all over the world and I've improved my English reading skills. It is suggested that you introduce more about Chinese traditional culture and inspiring stories in it.

I really hope English Monthly will attract more readers.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】【思路点拨】

写作时，应该注意以下几点：1.人称：题目要求是假设你是李华，请你给你最喜欢的《英语月报》写封电子邮件，给出建议，所以应以第一人称为主；2.时态：以一般现在时为主；3.写作要点：1）自我介绍；2）说明该报的优点；3）提出建议。4.句子之间和段落之间使用关联词，如For one thing,...For another 等，使句子通顺，全文意思连贯；5.在能力范围内使用亮点词汇和高分句型，以此增加文章的亮点，提升文章的档次；6.书写工整，词数100左右。

【亮点短语】

1.be enthusiastic about...对......热心；

2.be rich in content内容丰富；

3.range from ... to ...范围从......到...... 【高分句型】

1.I'm a high school student who has been exposed to English for 8 years and is enthusiastic about reading newspapers .（who引导限制性定语从句）

2.Foe one thing, it's rich in content, ranging from economy to civilization.（现在分词短语ranging from economy to civilization作状语，表示“伴随”状况）

3.It is suggested that you introduce more about Chinese traditional culture and inspiring stories in it.（it做形式

主语，that从句是真正主语）

4.假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Tom对学习汉语汉语很感兴趣。请你写封回信介绍你的母语并对如何学好

它给出建议。

要点如下：（1）汉语是世界上最古老的语言之一，也是联合国(United Nations) 的工作语言之一；

（2）学习汉语的重要性；（3）如何学好汉语。

要求:（1）字数120词左右。（2）可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

【答案】Dear Tom,

Chinese is one of the most ancient languages in the world. Although English is used all around the world, more and more people speak Chinese nowadays. You will hear Chinese spoken in many countries and areas. Chinese is also one of the official languages of the United Nations.

Now that China is becoming stronger, Chinese will certainly play a more important part in international

communication. More and more people in the world are beginning to learn Chinese and many famous universities have set Chinese course.

I'm sure that it is a good idea for people from other countries to learn Chinese.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】【思路点拨】

这是一篇应用文写作，写一封信。给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态以一般现在时为主。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑，注意衔接词和过渡句的使用。适当添加高级句型和高级词汇，增加文章的亮点。

【亮点词汇】

1.play an important part in在……中起重要作用；

2.now that既然，由于

【高分句型】

1. Although English is used all around the world, more and more people speak Chinese nowadays. (although引

导的让步状语从句）

2. Now that China is becoming stronger, Chinese will certainly play a more important part in international

communication. (now that引导的原因状语从句）

2. I'm sure that it is a good idea for people from other countries to learn Chinese.（that引导的宾语从句）

5.假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。英国交换生Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对你校的学生社团非常感兴趣，

计划下学期参加其中一个。他向你征询建议。

请给他回邮件，内容包括：

(1)推荐的社团；(2)推荐的理由；(3)建议他做哪些准备。

注意：(1)词数不少于100；(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

_______________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jim,

I'm more than delighted to know you are curious about the club activities of our school and want to join one next term. I'd like to recommend Peking Opera club to you, from which I believe you will enjoy a lot.

I recommend this club to you for the following reasons. First, Peking Opera is like a pearl in Chinese

traditional art. Joining this club can give you a taste of Chinese traditional art forms and even have a hands-on experience. Besides, the club will regularly organize various activities, such as inviting famous actors to perform, and drawing Peking Opera make-ups. Considering your interest in Chinese culture, I believe getting close to Peking Opera will also be a good way of learning more about it.

When it comes to preparation, you can watch some famous Peking Opera videos on the Internet or read some relevant materials, which will definitely be beneficial to you.

Hope my suggestions can be of help. If you want to learn anything more, don't hesitate to contact me.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

6.假定你是李华，上周与外教Simon约好本周六下午在学校阅览室向他请教香港大学英文面试技巧，但你

因某种原因不能赴约。请给他写一封邮件说明情况，内容包括：

(1)表达歉意；(2)说明未能赴约的原因；(3)另约一个时间再次请教。

注意：(1)词数80左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Dear Mr. Simon,

With uter sincerity, I am writing to convey my apology for my failure to meet you at the school reading room as scheduled.

In the past week, I was so occupied with the intense preparation for the end-term examination that I was incapable of sparing extra time to look into any informaton about Hong Kong Univerity. I was wondering if you are kind enoudh to spare some of your precious time to help me with the interview next Saturday.

I am exceedingly apologetic about any inconvenience caused by the sudden change of the schedule. Thanks for

your understanding.

Yours sincerely,

LiHua

【解析】【思路点拨】本文属于提纲作文，假定你是李华，上周与外教Simon约好本周六下午在学校阅览室向他请教香港大学英文面试技巧，但你因某种原因不能赴约。请给他写一封邮件说明情况，内容包括：(1)表达歉意；(2)说明未能赴约的原因；(3)另约一个时间再次请教。写作时应该注意以下几点：1. 人称：应以第一人称为主；2. 时态：应以一般现在时为主；3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；4.在能力范围内，使用亮点词汇和高分句型，以此增加文章的亮点，提升文章的档次。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。

【亮点短语】

1.as scheduled 如期，按照预定时间；

2.be occupied with忙于做某事。

【高分句型】

1.In the past week, I was so occuoied with the intense preparation for the end-term examination that I was

incapable of sparing extra time to look into any informaton about Hong Kong Univerity. （so…that…句型）

2. I was wondering if you are kind enoudh to spare some of your precious time to help me with the interview next

Saturday.（宾语从句）

7.假定你是李华，近些年来，共享单车（shared bikes）给市民的生活带来了极大的便利，可你也经常看到

许多关于使用共享单车的不文明行为（uncivilized behavior），如乱停乱放、私自占用、故意破坏等等。

请你就此现象给共享单车公司写一封信，反映这些不文明的情况并给出一些解决办法。

注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Company,

Yours,

Li hua

【答案】Dear Company,

I'm Li Hua. I noticed that your shared bikes have brought much convenience for our life recently, and at the same time they are friendly to the environment.

However, many uncivilized behaviors also appeared. Some people place the bikes wherever they want. Some occupy the bikes privately. Others even break the bikes deliberately. I think these are bad for your company and users. Some measures should be taken to stop them. In my opinion, you could make some punishments on the uncivilized behaviors, or ban these people from using shared bikes. And you may employ more staffs to take charge of users on the streets.

I hope my advice is useful to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】【思路点拨】这是一篇提纲类作文，该作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要学生准确表达。学生可先反映这些不文明的情况，然后再提出解决方法和希望。本篇写作的时态应以一般现在时为主，人称可根据语境的变化进行选择。写作时注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也需适当使用高级词汇和高级句型，使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，学生平时除了加强词汇积累、写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点短语】

1.take charge of 管理，负责；

2.ban sb. from doing sth.禁止某人做某事；

3.be useful to...对……有用。

【高分句型】

1.I noticed that your shared bikes have brought much convenience for our life recently, and at the same time they

are friendly to the environment.（that引导的宾语从句）

2.Some people place the bikes wherever they want.（wherever引导的状语从句）

8.假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡（Singapore）举办夏令营，欢迎各国学

生参加．请写一封电子邮件申请参加．

内容主要包括：（1）自我介绍（包括英语能力）；（2）参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）；（3）

希望获准．注意：（1）词数100左右：（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam，

I'm Li Hua，a middle school student from China．（自我介绍）I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it．【高分句型】I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it．I've been learning English for 10 years，and I speak fluent English．What is more，I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well．（参加意图）I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp．（希望获准）Looking forward to your reply!

Regards，

Li Hua

【解析】本文为应用文---电子邮件的写作，属于提纲作文．在写作时应使用第一人称，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时．重要短语：the summer camp（夏令营），be interested in（感兴趣），take part in （参加），fluent （流利的），be accepted as （被接受）．

提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，并适当增加细节．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．

9.假定你是李华．你在肯尼亚的网友John擅长长跑，请你用英语给他写封邮件，建议他来中国参加马拉松

比赛．内容包括：1．写信原因；2．你的建议；3．你能帮他做什么．

注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数．

Dear John，

How are you doing in Kenya？

______

What do you think of my suggestion？ Looking forward to your reply!

Yours，

Li Hua

【答案】How are you doing in Kenya？Nowadays more and more Africans are enthusiastic about coming to China to take part in marathons held in different cities．They can not only make a large number of new friends here but also win a great deal of prize money if they have the ability to win the marathons．【高分句型一】（很

多非洲朋友来中国参加马拉松）

So far as I know，you spend two hours or so practicing running every day and you are especially good at

long-distance running，so why don't you come compete in marathons held in China？If so，your are likely to be a marathons winner and take away much prize money．Besides，I will show you around and take you to some places of interest in China．【高分句型二】（建议他也来参加并且愿意帮）

【解析】Dear John，

How are you doing in Kenya？Nowadays more and more Africans are enthusiastic about coming to China to take part in marathons held in different cities．They can not only make a large number of new friends here but also win a great deal of prize money if they have the ability to win the marathons．【高分句型一】（很多非洲朋友来中国参加马拉松）

So far as I know，you spend two hours or so practicing running every day and you are especially good at long-distance running，so why don't you come compete in marathons held in China？If so，your are likely to be a marathons winner and take away much prize money．Besides，I will show you around and take you to some places of interest in China．【高分句型二】（建议他也来参加并且愿意帮）

What do you think of my suggestion？Looking forward to your reply!（期盼他的答复）

Yours，

Li Hua

这是李华给肯尼亚的网友John的一封信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称，时态以一般现在时态为主．内容包括：1，很多非洲朋友来中国参加马拉松；2．建议他也来参加并且愿意帮；3．期盼他的答复．

高分句型

1．They can not only make a large number of new friends here but also win a great deal of prize money if they have the ability to win the marathons．句子里a large number of 表示"大量的"，修饰可数名词new friends；

a great deal of 表示"大量的"，修饰不可数名词prize money；have the ability to 表示"有能力做某事"．

如果他们有能力赢得比赛，他们不仅可以交很多朋友，而且赢得了一大笔奖金．

2．Besides，I will show you around and take you to some places of interest in China．句子里some places of interest 表示"名胜景点"．

此外，我会领着你四处旅游，带你去一些中国的名胜景点．

考查提纲类作文．

写作步骤

第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．

第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．

第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．

10.假定你是李华。为参加你校下个月举办的戏剧比赛(Drama Competition)，你班同学排练了《哈姆雷特》

(Hamlet)。请你用英语给外教Charles写一封邮件，邀请他前来指导，内容包括：

(1)约定时间及地点；(2)指导内容。

注意：(1)词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Charles,

__________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Charles,

Recently our class has been busy preparing Hamlet for the Drama Competition to be held next month. I'd like to invite you to come to our classroom at ten this Saturday morning and offer your guidance on our performance. I would also appreciate it if you could share your valued opinions on our costumes, acting skills, onstage light and sound effects. Of course, any suggestions are highly appreciated and we will make proper adjustments accordingly.

I'm looking forward to your coming.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】【思路点拨】

本篇是提纲类作文，要求写一封邀请信。邀请英语外教前来指导话剧表演，包括约定的时间、地点以及指导内容。写作时注意以下几点：1.仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，2.要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点短语】

1. offer guidance on... 提供有关……的指导；

2. make proper adjustments 做适当调整

【高分句型】

I would also appreciate it if you could share your valued opinions on our costumes, acting skills, onstage light and

sound effects. （if引导的宾语从句，it是形式宾语）

11.假定你是李华，为了缓解交通压力，你的家乡大力发展公共交通，增加公交车的数量。请你用英语给你

的朋友Mary写一封邮件，谈谈这一措施实施后的变化。内容包括：

(1)实施这一措施的原因；(2)实施这一措施后的变化；(3)你对此措施的看法。

注意：(1)词数100左右;(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；(3)邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，但是不计入总词数。参考词汇：私人的private，措施measure

Dear Mary,

_______________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Mary,

How is everything going? I am writing to tell you some changes that have taken place in my hometown.

With the increasing number of private cars, roads are becoming more and more crowded, which has caused serious problems, such as air pollution and traffic accidents. Luckily, the government has taken some measures to solve the problems. A large number of buses are put to use. Gradually, more and more people choose to take buses instead of driving. As a result, roads become less crowded and our environment is improved. What's more, traffic accidents have been greatly reduced.

In my opinion, with these useful measures, I believe we can live in a cleaner and safer environment.

Yours，

Li Hua 【解析】【思路点拨】

这是提示类应用文电子邮件的写作。题目的要求是：假定你是李华，为了缓解交通压力，你的家乡大力发展公共交通，增加公交车的数量。请你用英语给你的朋友Mary写一封邮件，谈谈这一措施实施后的变化。所以，写作时应该注意以下几点：1、人称：应以第一人称为主；时态：应以一般现在时为主；3、写作要点：1)实施这一措施的原因；2)实施这一措施后的变化；3)你对此措施的看法；4、适当添加细节，以使行文连贯；5、在能力范围内，，使用亮点词汇和高分句型，以此增加文章的亮点，提升文章的档次；

6、词数100字左右。

【亮点词汇】

1.take some measures采取措施；

2.be put to use投入使用；

3. live in a cleaner and safer environment生活在一个更清洁、更安全的环境中。

【高分句型】

1.I am writing to tell you some changes that have taken place in my hometown. （that引导限制性定语从句：

句意：我写信告诉你我家乡发生的一些变化。）

2. With the increasing number of private cars, roads are becoming more and more crowded, which has caused

serious problems, such as air pollution and traffic accidents.（which引导非限制性定语从句。句意：随着私家车的增多，道路越来越拥挤，造成了严重的空气污染和交通事故等问题。）

12.假如你是李华，你的好友Susan前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她很难习惯美国的校园生活，感

到很孤独，请你根据以下要点用英文给她写一封电子邮件。

(1)学好英语，会有更多机会和别人交流。

(2)多交朋友，朋友和友情会使她忘记孤独。

(3)积极参加课外活动，让自己的生活更有趣。

Dear Susan,

__________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Susan,

I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in America, but this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice.

Firstly, you are supposed to devote yourself to English, which can enable you to get more opportunities to communicate with others. Secondly, making some close friends really makes a great difference to your feeling, as friendship can help you forget your own loneliness without feeling distant. Thirdly, it will be a good idea if you take an active part in various after-class activities, which will help to make your life more colourful and interesting.

I firmly believe by doing so, you will have a cheerful state of mind and be happier with your new life soon.

I hope you will find these ideas useful.

Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】【思路点拨】

1.认真审题，明确要求。这是一封信，属于应用文；此信针对你的好友苏珊前不久随父母去了美国，很

不适应美国的校园生活，感到很孤独，所以你给他写一封建议信。故时态是一般现在时。2.紧扣主题。

你为了帮助她，所以给他写一封建议信，内容如下：学好英语，从而增加和别人交流的机会；多交一些朋友，友情会使他忘记孤独；积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣。3.选词造句，表达要准确。

4.整理成篇，行文要连贯。

【亮点词汇】

1. have trouble doing sth. 做某事有困难；

2. adapt to适应；

3. know more about America更多了解美国

4. help you forget your loneliness帮你忘记孤单；

5. take an active part in all kinds of activities积极参加各种

活动。

【高分句型】

1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting yourself to your new school life in America，听说你在

美国的新学校生活有困难，我很难过。（宾语从句）

2.which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. 这可以给你更多的机会与他人交流。（定

语从句）

3.which will help to make life more interesting.这将有助于使生活更有趣。（定语从句）

13.某英文网站发布了一个题为“Things We Should Do in High School”的帖子。请你根据所给的提示写一个

英语回帖。(1)获取知识；(2)培养良好习惯及独立能力；(3)多交朋友。

注意：(1)词数100个左右；(2)可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

Things We Should Do in High School

__________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 It goes without saying that high school life is one of the most important periods in our life. It is so wonderful that many people consider it golden time.

In my view, high school life, first of all, is a time to gain knowledge and wisdom. To achieve this goal, we must settle down to working hard on all our lessons. Secondly, high school life is a time to learn how to live. That is to say, we should develop as many good habits as possible and improve our ability to live independently. Thirdly, high school life is also a time to make friends, have fun, and learn how to get along with others.

As far as I'm concerned, I'll cherish and enjoy my high school life forever!

【解析】【思路点拨】这是提示类应用文写作。题目要求是：某英文网站发布了一个题

为“Things We Should Do in High School”的帖子。请你根据所给的提示写一个英语回帖。(1)获取知识； (2)培养良好习惯及独立能力； (3)多交朋友。写作时应该注意以下几点：1. 人称：应以第一人称为主；2. 时态：应以一般现在时为主；3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；4.在能力范围内，使用亮点词汇和高分句型，以此增加文章的亮点，提升文章的档次。

【亮点短语】

1.settle down to …专心致力于……；

2.get along with …与……友好相处

【高分句型】

1.It is so wonderful that many people consider it golden time.（so…that…句型）

2. As far as I'm concerned, I'll cherish and enjoy my high school life forever!（条件状语）

14.假设你是李华，你班同学打算本周日骑行去游览长城。请你写一封电子邮件邀请你们的外教布鲁斯

(Bruce) 一同前往。要点包括：(1)出发时间及地点；(2)出行方式及需要携带的物品；(3)希望得到回复。

注意: (1)词数100左右；(2)可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

__________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Dear Bruce,

Our class are going to visit the Great Wall this Sunday. We'd like to invite you to go with us.

You know, spring is the best time of the year to visit the Great Wall as the weather gets warmer and the trees begin to turn green. So we'll surely get a good view from the Great Wall.

We're setting off from our school at eight in the morning. Then we'll go there by bike. We'd better take some food and water with us. Moreover, plastic bags are necessary as we need put the rubbish into them. In addition, please take your camera to take photos. If you can come, please let us know.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】【思路点拨】

本文是一篇应用文写作。要求写一封电子邮件邀请你们的外教布鲁斯本周日和你们一同骑行去游览长城。

内容要点已给出，要结合要点提示做适当拓展，充实文章内容。写作时，要注意词汇的准确运用和句式结构的选择，并添加适当的衔接词，以使行文连贯。

【亮点词汇】

1.set off出发，动身；

2.in addition另外，此外。

【高分句型】

1.You know, spring is the best time of the year to visit the Great Wall as the weather gets warmer and the trees

begin to turn green. （动词不定式结构作定语；as引导原因状语从句）

2.Moreover, plastic bags are necessary as we need put the rubbish into them. (as引导原因状语从句）

15.假定你是李华，你校下个月将举办“京剧进校园”活动。请你邀请来自澳大利亚的交换生Peter参加此次

活动，并根据以下提示用英文给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

(1)活动的时间和地点：

(2)活动内容：艺术家表演、介绍京剧历史和主要角色等：(3)活动目的：传承，发扬传统文化。

注意：(1)词数80左右：(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：(3)开头和结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数。参考词汇：京剧：Peking Opera

Dear Peter,

_______________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】 Dear Peter,

Next month our school will organize a series of activities focusing on “Local Opera Enters Middle Schools ". I know you like Chinese traditional art. So I want to invite you to take part in this activity.

First, all the students will be allowed to attend the lecture on Beijing Opera in the lecture hall. Two experts o

f our school will introduce the history, the major roles, and facial paintin

g of Beijing Opera. Then the students w

ill enjoy a live performance by professional actors. Local training classes will also be offered to students. It is

a rare chance for you to appreciate Beijing Opera.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】【思路点拨】

本文属于应用文。时态以一般将来时为主。要覆盖所有内容要点。尽可能应用较多的语法结构和词汇。

为使文章增色，可使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇；有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。以达到预期的写作目的。

【亮点短语】

1.a series of一系列;

2.invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事;

3.take part in参加;

【高分句型】

1. I know you like Chinese traditional art. （ you like Chinese traditional art是that引导的宾语从句，省略了

that）

2.Local training classes will also be offered to students.（运用了一般将来时的被动语态）

16.近来,上海最严垃圾分类措施引发人们的热议,城市每天产生大量各种垃圾,已成为令每个城市头疼的问题。

假设你是某市第一中学学生李华,请以此为话题,给市长写一封信说明问题和对垃圾分类提出建议。建议内容:

(1)减少垃圾量和垃圾对环境的污染; (2)回收资源,有利于环境保护;

(3)呼吁政府应采取垃圾分类的有效措施。

注意:(1)词数:100左右;(2)内容可适当发挥,注意行文连贯;(3)参考词汇:垃圾分类rubbish classification

_______________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Dear mayor,

I?m Li Hua, a student from the NO.1 middle school of our city. Our city produces a lot of rubbish, such as leftover food, waste paper, plastic bottles and batteries every day. It has become a big headache in every city. How to solve this problem? I think rubbish classification is a good way of dealing with it.

Firstly, rubbish classification can reduce the amount of rubbish and the rubbish pollution to the environment. What is more, it can recycle resources, which will do good to our environmental protection.

Since rubbish classification has so many advantages, I sincerely hope our government should take effective measures and immediate actions. Different dustbins should be placed in public places so that residents can leave their sorted rubbish in them.

Hoping you can take my advice!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】【思路点拨】

根据题目要求：近来,上海最严垃圾分类措施引发人们的热议,城市每天产生大量各种垃圾,已成为令每个城市头疼的问题。假设你是某市第一中学学生李华,请以此为话题,给市长写一封信说明问题和对垃圾分类提出建议。建议内容:(1)减少垃圾量和垃圾对环境的污染;(2)回收资源,有利于环境保护;(3)呼吁政府应采取垃圾分类的有效措施。写作时注意把提示要点准确的表达出来，并适当发挥，使文章更充实。写作时注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。另外注意书写工整，尽量避免拼写错误，词数100左右。

【亮点短语】

1.deal with处理；

2.what is more此外；

3.take effective measures采取有效措施。

【重点句型】

1.What is more, it can recycle resources, which will do good to our environmental protection. （which引导的非限定性定语从句）

2.Different dustbins should be placed in public places so that residents can leave their sorted rubbish in them.（so that引导的目的状语从句）

17.假定你是李华，你发现许多同学经常从网上搜索英语作业和试卷的答案。请你用英语写一封信给外教

Robert,向他反映此事。内容包括：

(1)简述该现象；(2)指出它的危害（至少2点）；(3)你的意见。

注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

__________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Robert.

There are many students who get the habit of searching answers of English homework and test papers on the Internet. It is easy to know the answers directly without thinking a minute. However, it has many disadvantages.

In the long run, the students will lag behind others. In addition, cheating in the test is a dishonest behavior which, to a certain extent, affects the justice of the test. More importantly, it can not help students get practical skills or enter a good university.

In my opinion, as a student, we should be true to ourselves and depend on ourselves to get high grades through studying hard. Please give me some advice to help them to get rid of the habit.

Yours.

Li Hua

【解析】【思路点拨】

本文属于应用文中的书信，时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称和第三人称。根据提示和题目要求，文章应分三个段落进行写作：段落一应陈述同学间存在网上搜索作业和试卷答案的现象；段落二应给出这种现象存在的危害；段落三应给出你自己的意见。写作时注意准确运用时态，保证上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用亮点短语和高分句型，使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点短语】

1.get the habit of养成……的习惯；

2.in the long run从长远来看；

3.get rid of摆脱，扔掉，丢弃

【高分句型】

1.There are many students who get the habit of searching answers of homework and test papers on the Internet.

（who引导的限制性定语从句）

2.In addition, cheating in the test is a dishonest behavior which, to a certain extent, affects the justice of the test.

（动名词短语作主语；which引导的限制性定语从句）

18.假如你是李华。你的笔友Kenton写信告诉你，他自从上了高中之后成绩不理想，每次考试总是犯很多错

误，他很焦虑。请你用英语回信，给他提一些建议。要点提示:

（1）表示安慰；（2）提出建议；（3）给予鼓励。

注意:（1）词数100左右；（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;（3）文章开头和结尾已给出。

Dear Kenton,

I’ve received your letter.

__________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Kenton,

I've received your letter. From your letter, I know that you are worried about your scores because you always make mistakes in exams. However, you should remember that even the best student can make mistakes sometimes, so don't put too much pressure on yourself.

As far as I am concerned, learning from your mistakes in past exams is a quick way to stop making the same mistakes next time. To begin with, if there are questions that can't be solved by yourself, you should turn to your teachers or classmates for help. What's more, during the exams you'd better make a good plan to distribute your time according to the questions. Besides, try to leave a few minutes at the end to check your answers.

Enjoy the challenge that each new exam brings to you. I believe a good learning habit will finally help you gain success.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】【思路点拨】

这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。

写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点词汇】

1.be worried about担心……；

2.make mistakes犯错误；

3.as far as sb be concerned就……而言；

4.learn from从……中学习；

5.to begin with首先；起初；

6.turn to求助于；

7.according to根据；

8.at the end在……末尾；

【高分句型】

1.From your letter, I know that you are worried about your scores because you always make mistakes in exams.

（that引导宾语从句；because引导原因状语从句）

2.As far as I am concerned, learning from your mistakes in past exams is a quick way to stop making the same

mistakes next time. （动名词作主语和宾语）

3. Enjoy the challenge that each new exam brings to you.（that引导定语从句）

19.假如你是李华, 上周你在海外购物网站Amazon上购买了一个书包, 但是寄到后发现存在质量问题, 请你

给该网站负贵人Smith先生写一封信, 内容包括: (1)反应质量问题；(2)你的诉求。

注意: (1)可以适当补充细节, 以使行文连贯; (2)词数100左右.

【答案】Dear Smith,

I am Li Hua, a regular customer of Amazon. I'm sorry to trouble you, but I have to make a complaint about the

school bag I purchased last week.

When receiving the school bag, I was disappointed to find the color was quite different from what was shown in the advertisement. What also annoyed me was that there were several black spots on the bag, which couldn't be wiped away. For the reasons above, I strongly demand either the school bag be exchanged or I be compensated with full refund.

Looking forward to your prompt reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】【思路点拨】

本文属于投诉信。应保持整篇的语言形式和风格符合表达的要求。写作时应包含所提供的写作要点，写作要点为：（1)反应质量问题；（2)你的诉求。写作时，应注意时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时，写作以第一人称为主。同时，要注意对要点作适当拓展，充实文章内容，加入适当的衔接词以使行文连贯。另外，要注意高级词汇和句式的使用。

【亮点短语】

1.make a complaint about对……提出投诉；

2.be different from与……不同，不同于；

3.wipe away擦去；

https://www.docsj.com/doc/2515491366.html,pensate with弥补，用……赔偿。

【高分句型】

1.When receiving the school bag, I was disappointed to find the color was quite different from what was shown in

the advertisement. (when引导时间状语从句用了省略结构，what引导宾语从句）

2.What also annoyed me was that there were several black spots on the bag, which couldn't be wiped away. (what

引导主语从句，that引导表语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句）

20.假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter想了解一些中国传统文化“孝”的相关知识，请你给他发一封电子邮

件，介绍一些有关“孝”的文化。内容包括：

（1）孝是中华民族传统美德，从周朝开始就有相关法律规定行孝；

（2）孝道的意义；（3）日常生活中如何行孝道。

注意：（1）词数100左右；（2）可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯流畅。

参考词汇：孝，孝道filial piety 美德virtue

Dear Peter,

______________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Peter,

It's my pleasure to introduce something about the Chinese traditional virtues to you.

It is well-known that there are many traditional virtues in China, among which filial piety is regarded as the most important one. Being filial was included into the law in the ancient Zhou dynasty to force people to respect the elders and support parents.

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Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

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