文档视界 最新最全的文档下载
当前位置:文档视界 › 2017年高考满分作文-五年高考英语满分作文解析及写作素材积累

2017年高考满分作文-五年高考英语满分作文解析及写作素材积累

2017年高考满分作文-五年高考英语满分作文解析及写作素材积累
2017年高考满分作文-五年高考英语满分作文解析及写作素材积累

2017年高考满分作文

1.2017年新课标全国卷I

假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:(1)时间和地点;

(2)内容:学习唐诗;

(3)课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路分析】

今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件,告知外国朋友汉语课的时间和内容(属学校生活、语言学习范畴)。与往年相比最大的变化是涉及我国优秀的传统文化,这符合2017年英语高考大纲提出的:在英语学习上重视和突出中华传统价值观,重视语言应用,回归了英语作为语言功能的本质。因此,掌握一些传统文化方面的英语知识很有必要。

文体:书信体,一种常见的告知信,相对简单。

人物关系:朋友

问候语及开头语:How are you? / How is everything going? / How are things with you? /I am writing to you about…./ I am writing to tell you something about….

写信目的:告知上课时间,内容及课前准备

结束语如:Looking forward to seeing you again. / Looking forward to your early reply. /Hope to hear from you soon / Best wishes.

个人发挥,适当增加相关细节

语言分析

话题词激活

学校生活:take part in, attend, activity, knowledge

语言学习:acquire, advises sb. to do sth.,在平时的学习中要注意话题词的积累。

运用高级句式:如:since引导的状语从句,which 引导的非限制性定语从句。

【满分范文】

Dear Leslie,

Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】随着时代的发展,电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎,所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事,这种形式的写作贴近学生生活,使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意:1. 要点要齐全:(1)时间和地点;(2)内容:学习唐诗;(3)课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。2. 时态:以一般现在时为主;3. 人称:第二人称为主;4. 注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。

2.2017年新课标全国卷II

假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:

1.展览时间、地点;

2.展览内容。

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路分析】

题目要求写封邮件邀请外教参观中国剪纸艺术展。写作情境设置真实,任务要求符合学生能力水平,自然地融入了我国优秀传统文化(剪纸paper-cutting)的内容,能够引导学生在使用外语了解世界的同时,注重传承发扬中华民族优秀文明成果,运用中国元素讲中国故事,增强文化自信。该写作贴近学生生活,学生有话可说。考生成文时应注意:1. 结构采用三段成文:第一段自我介绍并引出话题;第二段具体交代活动时间、地点;第三段较为详细地交代展览内容。2. 时态:以一般将来时和一般现在时为主。3. 人称:第一人称。4. 注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级词汇和句型以提高作文档次。

【满分范文】

Dear Henry,

You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which paper-cutting is one of the most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of paper-cuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Regards,

Li Hua

3.2017年新课标全国卷III

假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入,内容包括:

1.球队活动;

2.报名方式及截止日期。

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路分析】

该篇书面表达是书信类文体,但是与体育有关,要求考生按照所给提示进行写作,可增加细节以使行文连贯。在写作本文时考生需注意以下几点:1. 确定文章的结构:书信的开头、正文和结尾。2. 确定文章的要点:写信的目的;表示感谢。3. 确定文章的布局。4. 确定文章的时态,在本文中根据要求判断应该用一般现在时和一般将来时。5. 正确使用较高级词汇和多种句式,如定语从句,状语从句,主语从句等。

6. 准确使用一些恰当的连接成分以使语意更连贯。

【满分范文】

Dear Eric,

If you are interested, sign up on our school website before August 10.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

4.2017年浙江卷

假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:

1. 参加者;

2. 时间、地点;

3. 活动:登山、野餐等。

注意:

1. 词数80左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路分析】

本试题是一篇半开放的作文,写作文体是电子邮件,写一封邀请信给Chris。要点提示中只列出了大概内容,包括3点(参加者,时间、地点和活动),具体细节需要考生自己发挥。邀请信一般分为以下几部分:首先,要列出写信的目的,并发出诚挚邀请;其次,要就邀请的具体内容给予明确的说明,什么时间,什么地点,做什么事情等;最后,要再次表示邀请,希望对方参加。

【一句多译】

①My intention to write this letter is to tell you an outgoing that we will make these days.

②Our destination is Siming Mountain, where we will have a climb together with the local people we will hold a picnic party.

【满分范文】

Dear Chris,

How are you now? ①The purpose of my writing is to tell you that there will be an outgoing for us these days. I would be honored to have you there with us, enjoying the colorful days.

The occasion will start on the next Sunday morning. ②We will go to Siming Mountain, where we can have a climb. What’s more, we can also hold a picnic party with the local people.

I really hope you can make it. And I do look forward to receiving your reply letter as soon as possible.

5.2017年天津卷

假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况,请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。

(1)简要介绍自己的学习和生活;

(2)告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等);

(3)希望她有机会重访天津。

注意:

(1)词数不少于100;

(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;

(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:第十三届全运会 the 13th National Games

Dear Mrs. Green,

I’m glad to hear from you. ______________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Jin 【思路分析】

这是一封邮件,要点都已经给出,关键在于要点要全面,不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲,考生还要在此基础上增加细节,不要逐字逐句翻译,同时要注意谋篇布局的顺序,运用合适的连接词连接全文,同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文时态主要是一般现在时和现在完成时,描述要尽量选择简洁的语言,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来,这样文章显得更连贯。

【满分范文】

Dear Mrs. Green,

I’m so glad to hear from you.While it has been more than a year since you taught us English, I’ve missed you a lot, thinking about those happy moments when we stayed with you. Actually, I’ve been doing pretty well in my studies as well as in my life. Apart from my academic studies, I always manage to find time for what I’m interested in. For example, I have successfully got admitted as a volunteer for the 13th National Games, which is scheduled to be held at the end of this August. To get admitted, I have made good preparations beforehand, trying to know as much as I could about my city, Tianjin.

By the way, it’s my sincere hope that you can spare some time for a visit to Tianjin again, which has changed greatly since you left.

Please let me know if you come to Tianjin.

Yours,

Li Jin

6.2017年北京卷

第一节(15分)

你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:

1.你建议的线路;

2.你的理由;

3.你的祝愿。

注意:1.词数不少于50;

2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

_____ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,

Li Hua

【满分范文】

本文为提纲类作文。首先,学生要仔细阅读提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。其次,要注意提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。最后,要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态,语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一封信,按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构,三段式,其中第一段写你所建议的路线,第二部分是本文的主体,要阐述你所建议的路线的原因,好让他们有很好的掌握,最后一段,提出你的祝愿。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【答案】

Dear Jim,

I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.

Yours,

Li Hua

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全,结构严谨,层次分明,布局合理,语言精练,同时运用高级句子。表语从句的使用:That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.高级词汇的使用:highly recommended。连接词的合理使用:Personally,moreover。

第二节

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。

注意:词数不少于60。

提示词:视频 video

(请务必讲作文写在答题卡指定区域内)

_____ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【思路分析】

本文属于看图说话类作文。首先要读懂图片隐含的信息,本文有四幅图,而且要求是按先后顺序,所以一定要注意顺序的问题;其次,根据图片隐含的信息把每幅图的主题找到,然后分别写出每幅图的主题句,也就是说把文章主体部分的大纲要列好,最后结合自己的看法,写出相应的总结和感受。写作的过程中一定要注意先后顺序,巧用连接词,巧妙衔接,合理安排。

【满分范文】

Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do something. After a heated discussion, we agreed

on making a video to record our experiences at school.

Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our te achers and took pictures of

every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debated over what to put into the video. Some compromises were unavoidable, but the v ideo turned out perfect. Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The students and teachers shared a gr eat time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.

7.2017年江苏卷

请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(box-office income)的柱状图及相关文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

【写作内容】

1. 用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容;

2. 我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些,简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考,原因不少于两点);

3. 谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法,并简要说明理由。

【写作要求】

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

3. 不必写标题。

【评分标准】

内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。

【思路分析】

本题考查任务型读写。此类作文对考生的能力要求极高。首先考生要以30词左右概述短文内容。接下来要分析票房收入变化的原因并给出自己的看法,并谈谈自己对票房走向的看法。作文以第三人称和一般现在时为主。

要点:

1. 概述:中国电影票房在2012—2016年间呈现不断增长的趋势,但是2016年的增长相比于前几年很缓慢。

2. 分析原因:票房增长与人们生活水平的不断提高息息相关,人们有了多余的钱,才可能消费、娱乐;另一方面,电影的制作技术日臻成熟,许多优质的电影不断上映;再者,互联网的普及无疑起到了很大的宣传作用。

3. 看法和理由:票房增速将会小幅上涨或有所回落。只要给出恰当的理由,对票房看涨或是看落皆可。

写30词的概述时,语言要简练、不拖沓。遣词造句要符合英语的表达习惯,尽量用上定语从句、状语从句和非谓语动词与倒装句等语法和句型。同时注意语句的连贯性。

【满分范文】

Possible version one:

The box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016.

China’s economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years, so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies. Therefore, its box-office income will probably enjoy a slight increase. (150 words)

Possible version two:

As is indicated in the graph, the box-office income of Chinese films increased constantly from 2012 to 2015, but its growth, for one reason or another, slowed down in 2016.

The increase in the box-office income can be attributed to a number of factors. The quality of life has improved and watching films is regarded as a good means of entertainment. Besides, filming technology has advanced and more quality films are on offer. Moreover, the Internet plays an important part. On the Internet, people can seek information about their favorite stars and buy tickets at a discount as well, which is both time-saving and economical.

However, the film market may witness a slowdown in the near future. Cinemas have gradually given way to the rise of the Internet and cellphones, and the ticket price is on the increase. Therefore, the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers. (150 words)

高考英语作文精选范文【五篇】

高考英语作文精选范文【五篇】 作文一: May l0th Monday Cloudy This afternoon my school held an English-speaking contest named"Challenging the Future" in the multi-function classroom. The students who are excellent at English took part in the contest. I just went there as an audience. I got a lot from their speech. In their speech, I found all of them had made full use of the present time and conditions to prepare for the future and used the known factors to challenge the unknown ones. From this I realized that we shouldn't waste our time of today and shouldn't put today's work off to tomorrow. Today is the base of tomorrow. I will no longer waste my present time. I am going to study hard and do good preparation for my future. 5月10日星期一多云 今天下午我们学校在多功能教室举办了题为“挑战未来”的英语演讲 比赛。那些擅长英语的学生参加了比赛。我作为观众去了多功能厅。 从他们的演讲中我学到了很多。在他们的演讲中,我发现他们都充分 利用了现在的时间和条件来为未来做准备,用已知的因素来挑战未知 的因素。由此我意识到我不应该浪费今天的时间,不应该把今天的事 推到明天。今天是明天的基础,我不再浪费现在的时间。我打算好好 学习为我的未来做好准备。 作文二: May l0th Monday Cloudy

高考英语满分作文10篇

2002年高考英语满分作文(十篇) 作文题目 最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况。 注意:1.信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数:100左右。 3.参考词汇:门票---entrance fee Dear Editor. I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entranc e fee should be charged for parks. 满分作文(一) Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entra nce fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fe e do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where th e public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If a n entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a g ate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us school mates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. T he money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buy ing some other kinds of flowers and trees. With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protec t a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor? Yours truly, Li Hua 满分作文(二) Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entranc e fee should be charged for parks. Sixty students out of one hundred think that an entr ance fee should not be bought before one enters a park, for it is a place for the public t o go to when they are free. If a ticket must be bought, a gate and walls have to be buil t for a park, which will make a city look ugly. Forty students out of one hundred thin k that an entrance fee should be bought before one enters a park, but that the price o f the ticket should be reasonable. Money that is got from ticket selling can be used t

优秀高考作文素材满分作文素材

优秀高考作文素材满分作文素材 高考作文要审好作文题目,才能写出符合题意的好文章。那么近年来的优秀高考作文都有哪些呢?下面是给大家整理的优秀高考满分作文素材,供大家参阅! 优秀的高考满分作文素材(一) 窗外 静好岁月缓缓流淌,徜徉在清浅流年的光影里,阳光轻吻着脸颊,微风抚过青春里明媚的忧伤。这样简单明净的日子里,我努力追寻着生命中的那抹温暖,努力地想要从生命的窗口里,望见那最美的一片风景。 安妮宝贝曾说:花开得太好,所以摇摇欲坠,这一切的事情,老得这样快。还记得当初,夏日午后照耀着暖阳的教室里,从后桌传来的纸条和那清澈明净的笑容。还记得当初,骑着自行车打闹着路过生长着爬山虎的红墙,风把笑声带到远方。还记得当初,一群人肩并肩躺在操场的草坪上,望着天空纯净的蓝,任微风拂过脸颊。而如今,身边的人早已散落各方,不复当初的模样。偶尔还会想起他们,带着回忆里的美好的笑和相见不如怀念的伤感。 当时光纺成的纱被绣成华美的图腾,我们被岁月的车轮载着渐行渐远,也渐渐与最初的梦想背道而驰。记忆里的窗口那单纯美好的想法早已模糊,生活中我们望见的是荆棘丛生的道路,我们被现实的残酷扎得鲜血淋漓,承受着一次又一次的打击。就在这种希望与失望的交替中,我们百炼

成钢,最终变得强大而现实。只是在流年的缝隙里,我时常看到曾经的自己,在岁月的边缘张望着,望着黑夜背后的那扇窗,倔强地想望出期待中的那片风景。 于是我明白,梦想永远不会被搁浅,因为梦想而留下的累累伤痕,正是生活给予你最珍贵的礼物。所以,即使遍体鳞伤,也要活得漂亮。就算颠沛流离之后才懂得生命的慷慨与繁华,就算洗尽铅华之后才明白岁月的蹉跎与无奈,可那又怎样。我一直在这里,等待命运开出一庄九天十地的牌局,示我以最后的输赢,尔后莞尔接受,给那些为梦想而奋斗的日子写上绝美的结局,孤独也一样盛放到极致。 莎士比亚曾说:即使从死亡的空洞的眼穴里,也能望见生命的讯息。所以,就算普罗旺斯的薰衣草田尽数凋亡,就算香格里拉的玫瑰花海燃成灰烬,我还是会说,生命的伟大与不朽,本就在于它能从绝望中寻得一线生机。我从失败的窗户里看到了坚持与希望,哪怕这一刻,黑夜吞噬了我,也会有另一个初升的暖阳,让我沐着阳光,冲向梦想的渡口。也许,从那扇窗外,我会看到彼岸,花开不靡。 双手合十,虔诚祝祷---只愿下一次凭窗眺望,一切依旧是纯白美好模样。 优秀的高考满分作文素材(二) 朽叶的栀子花 小城深处有条老巷。明晃晃黄醺醺的光蔓延一路,点亮了一个城市的古老温情。

高考优秀英语作文赏析

【高考优秀英语作文赏析】 ◆简要描述一下你通常是怎么过生日的,并阐述如何过生日更有意义。 My birthday never means cakes capped with inviting icing(糖霜)or throwing a crazy party. Usually, a simple piece of cake is bought for my mother, not for me, for I want to thank her for bringing my life and soul to this world and honor the hardships she had been through during her pregnancy. I would also feel needed when part of my money is donated to charity on that day. My birthday-just an ordinary day-spells two words: respect and give. Birthday should be extended to a deeper thinking of life. Days are gone when we were surrounded by those who loved us and were soaked in "happy birthday to you." Instead, it should be our turn to care about others with our respect and affection. No man can live in this society without being connected with others. All we’ve gained is largely due to others’ devotion and sacrifice. Our birthday has provided us with a platform to pay back what we’ve taken for granted and cherish what we’ve obtained. Show your gratitude and respect; give a helping hand to those who are desperate for help. All that makes our world a better place will make our birthday meaningful and prove our being mature. That’s what birthdays are all about! ◆描述你平时最喜欢去的地方,并说明理由。 As the world is becoming noisier and noisier, I would like to seek for a place to calm my heart. So the library is the best place for me to go to. Libraries are the places where you can find the origin of human civilization, the places where you can find high spirits of human beings, the places where you can have everlasting communication with ancient persons, where you can exchange ideas with people all over the world. You may broaden your mind and gain precious experiences of life which will lead you to a bright destination. The reason why I like visiting libraries most is that I show great interest in books since an early age. I am fond of equipping my mind with a great amount of knowledge and fulfilling my life. As books are teachers of life and can expand a person’s horizons, I would like to go to libraries to make my life more meaningful. In terms of all these facts concerned, libraries are my favorite place to go to in my leisure time. ◆DIY现在越来越受到青睐。你愿意选择这一方式吗?请说出你的理由。 According to a recent survey, there is a growing trend that modern people, however busy they are, turn to DIY when they are preparing a gift for their family members or close friends. From my point of view, I’m among the majority that tends to follow the trend. There are several reasons accounting for my choice. To begin with, through DIY, we are bound to improve our ability of using our hands. There is no denying that this kind of ability is of great importance to our work in the future. Moreover, it is in the course of DIY that we can be fully aware how difficult it is to make a thing on our own. As a result, we can better understand the saying “No pains, no gains.” Last but not least, we’d better take into account the fact that the things made by ourselves are far more meaningful. Only in this way can we truly express our love and care for others.

高考英语满分作文精选三(附翻译)

高考英语满分作文精选三(附翻译) 健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的,但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题,你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题,并结合提示给他们写一封信。 提示:1.要走路去上班,而不是开车或坐车; 2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次,或打球、或游泳; 3.饮食要健康; 4.不要工作太晚,要早休息。 要求:1.短文结构完整,意思连贯,语言流畅,语法准确,符合逻辑; 2.80—100词左右; 3.开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数。 【例文】 Dear Dad(Mum), You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health. I’m worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d bet ter take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better. Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy! Your loving son (daughter) Tom (Mary) 【翻译】 亲爱的爸爸(妈妈), 你每天这么忙,你不重视你的健康。我对你的健康担心所有的时间。我想给你一些建议。我听到走路是最好的运动。您的公司没有远离家乡,是吗?为什么不步行到办公室吗?你最好锻炼,每周至少一次,如在健身房打网球。去游泳也是一个不错的选择了。更重要的是,它需要有健康的食物。尽量不要熬夜太晚。有足够的睡眠可以让你的大脑工作得更好。

高考作文素材:高考满分作文经典段落50个

高考作文素材:高考满分作文经典段落50个 1.人生的意义在于奉献。如果你是一棵大树,就撒下一片阴凉;如果你是一泓清泉,就滋润一方土地;如果你是一棵小草,就增添一分绿意。如果你是一朵鲜花,就点缀一角夜空。如果你是一片白云,就装扮一方晴空。如果你是一只蜜蜂,就酿造一份甜蜜;如果你是一缕阳光,就照亮所有黑暗。如果你是一丝清风,就吹走世间尘埃。如果你是一阵春风,就吹绿田野的庄稼! 2.幸福是“临行密密缝,意恐迟迟归”的牵挂;幸福是“春种一粒粟,秋收千颗子”的收获。幸福是“采菊东篱下,悠然见南山”的闲适;幸福是“奇闻共欣赏,疑义相与析”的愉悦。幸福是“随风潜入夜,润物细无声”的奉献;幸福是“夜来风雨声,花落知多少”的恬淡。幸福是“零落成泥碾作尘,只有香如故”的圣洁。幸福是“壮志饥餐胡虏肉,笑谈渴饮匈奴血”的豪壮。幸福是“先天下之忧而忧,后天下之乐而乐”的胸怀。幸福是“人生自古谁无死,留取丹心照汗青”的气节。 3.从秋叶的飘零中,我们读出了季节的变换;从归雁的行列中,我读出了集体的力量;从冰雪的消融中,我们读出了春天的脚步;从穿石的滴水中,我们读出了坚持的可贵;从蜂蜜的浓香中,我们读出了勤劳的甜美。 4.墙角的花,当你孤芳自赏时,天地便小了;井底的蛙,当你自我欢唱时,视野便窄了;笼中的鸟,当你安于供养时,自由便没了;水中的萍,当你随波逐流后,根基就没了。 5.朋友是快乐日子里的一把吉它,尽情地为你弹奏生活的愉悦。朋友是忧伤日子里的一股春风,轻轻地为你拂去心中的愁云。朋友是成功道路上的一位良师,热情的将你引向阳光的地带。朋友是失败苦闷中的一盏明灯,默默地为你驱赶心灵的阴霾。 6.青春是一首歌,她拨动着我们年轻的心弦;青春是一团火,她点燃了我们沸腾的热血;青春是一面旗帜,她召唤着我们勇敢前行;青春是一本教科书,她启迪着我们的智慧和心灵。 7.如果说人生是一首优美的乐曲,那么痛苦则是一个不可缺少的音符。如果说人生是一望无际的大海,那么挫折则是其中一朵骤然翻起的浪花。如果说人生是湛蓝的天空,那么失意则是天际一朵漂浮的白云。 8.风从水上走过,留下粼粼波纹;骆驼从沙漠上走过,留下深深的脚印;哨鸽从天空飞过,留下串串欢韵;岁月从树林穿过,留下圈圈年轮。啊,朋友,我们从时代的舞台走过,将给社会留下些什么?花从春走过,留下缕缕花香;叶从夏走过,留下片片荫凉;风从秋走过,留下

高考英语满分作文及名师评析

2004年高考英语满分作文及名师评析 2004高考英语满分作文 【全国卷I】 【试题回放】 假设你是李华,你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人"学中文,唱中文歌"才艺大赛。你的美国朋友Peter正在北京一所大学学中文,你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事,并表示可以提供帮助。 比赛时间:7 月18日。报名时间:截止到6月30日。报名地点:北京电视台 注意:1.词数:100左右 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 3.参考词汇:才艺大赛talent show Dear Peter, I read in a newspaper today that a "Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs" Foreigners' Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you've learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you' U have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help. Yours, Li Hua [名师点评] 从整体上说,本文书写得简洁明快。语言简单平实,要点囊括齐全,结构完整。本文的主要特点是让步状语从句的使用,最后两句话,采用了if引导的让步状语从句,结合将来时使用。 【全国卷II】 【试题回放】 假设你是李华,加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间,Andy Smith将借住你家。请你代表全家写信给Andy,欢迎他的到来,并告知有关事宜。信的要点如下:

高考英语满分作文精选一(附翻译)

高考英语满分作文精选一(附翻译) 假设你叫王明,昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail,得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail,介绍学习中文的体会和方法,提出你的建议,以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。 【例文】 Dear David, I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well. Hope to see you soon in Beijing. Yours, Wang Ming 【翻译】 亲爱的大卫, 我很高兴你会来北京学习中文。中国是非常有益的,许多外国人正在学习,现在。这很难为你,因为它是相当的英语不同。你要记住尽可能多的中国话。同样重要的是做一些阅读和写作。你可以看电视,听广播练习你的听力。你最好不要谈论与中国人民。你可以学习汉语,不仅从书本上,而且从你周围的人。如果您有任何问题,请问我。我敢肯定你会学好中文。希望能尽快看到你在北京。 此致, 王明

江苏高考英语满分作文完整版完整版.doc

2007-2015江苏高考英语满分作文 2007年江苏高考英语满分作文 2007年4月29日上午10点到11点,全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时举行。江苏省1100万学生积极参与了这项活动。 教育部倡导学生:每天锻炼一小时·健康工作五十年·幸福生活一辈子 请你根据以上提示,用英语准备一份发言稿,向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况,并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼,谈谈你的看法及理由。 注意: 1.发言稿应包括以上所有信息,要有适当发挥。 2.词数:120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。 3.参考词汇:阳光体育活动—a national student sports program; 教育部—the Ministry of Education Good afternoon, everyone, Thank you! 参考范文: Good afternoon, everyone, On the morning of April 29,2007,from 10:00 to 11:00,hundreds of millions of students fromprimary, middle schools and universities all over China joined in a national student sportsprogram. Eleven million students in Jiangsu took an active part in this program. The Ministry of Education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day,in the hope thatthey will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life. Personally,I think it a good idea for us senior 3 students to have daily exercise. Although wetake a n hour a day for exercise,it is well worth it. Taking exercise helps us build up our bodyand keep a cl ear mind. Therefore,we can work more efficiently. Thank you! 2008年江苏高考英语满分作文 实现有效的沟通,建立良好的人际关系,不仅要善于言表、更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提 供的信息,写一篇题为“Being a Good Listener”的英文演讲稿。 为何倾听表示尊重,增进理解,建立良好的人际关系 谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子,消除代沟,…… 老师倾听学生了解学生,满足需求,…… 同学相互倾听增进友谊,互帮互学,…… 怎样倾听(请考生联系自己拟定内容,列举两至三点。) 注意:1. 对所给要点,逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。 2. 词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。 3. 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。 Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”........... Thank you for your listening! 参考范文: Good afternoon, everyone!

高考作文:一个人物为中心素材的高考满分作文3则-作文

高考作文:一个人物为中心素材的高考满分作文3则 高考作文:一个人物为中心素材的高考满分作文3则 一个人物为中心素材的高考满分作文 北京的符号 我看见祥子手里拨弄着现洋,心中盘算着买车,嘴里念叨着自己的小九九,身旁老北京洋车黑漆漆的车身、亮晶晶的瓦圈,闪着光;我看见王顺发忙着擦桌子抹茶碗招呼客人,手里拎着老北京的大茶壶,壶嘴徐徐吐着水雾;我看见祁家正房的清水脊子旁石榴正红,天井的八仙桌上老北京的兔儿爷昂首挺胸,老太爷微笑点头;我看见沙子龙直视徒众一言不发,心中暗道"不传!不传!",堂前老北京那支镖局长枪,静静倚立墙角,与主人遥相呼应……

读老舍先生的书,仿佛被书中人物引领着,游览北京的街巷,呼吸北京的气息,欣赏北京的色彩,聆听北京的节奏,感受北京的心情……老舍先生的作品,就是老北京的符号啊! 那是老北京的丝丝缕缕、点点滴滴。似一段京胡弦语,激越铿锵,余韵悠长;如一壶茉莉花茶,馥郁芬芳,回味无穷。 忘不了老舍先生品北京饮食——"良乡的肥大的栗子,和了砂糖在锅里‘刷刷’地炒着,连锅下的茶烟都是香的""高粱红的河蟹,用竹篓装着,沿街高声叫卖;而会享受的人们,会在酒楼里,用小小的木槌,轻轻敲裂那毛茸茸的蟹脚"——只有老北京才会有如此诱人的风味;也只有老舍先生,才能领略得如此动情,如此传神!

老舍先生虽然祖籍山东,可他却生在北京,长在北京,更无比地爱着北京。他爱老北京的一切,在他眼中,老北京正如旧历年张贴的年画:喜庆、稚拙,又不失王者的大气;细致、精巧,更传达着文化的气息。老舍先生正是用自己的笔,用自己的心,以自己对北京的无比热爱,描绘出一个真实而又理想的北京,一个现实而又诗意的北京。于是,老舍先生的文字,老舍先生的名字,也因此成了北京的象征、北京的符号。 老舍先生出过国,留过洋,他自然懂得时代终究会推动"老北京"变成"新北京",这是一种欣喜与哀婉交织的复杂情感。这种情感,也常常在他的作品中流露出来——《四世同堂》的主人公瑞宣,喜欢逛八面槽、大栅栏、琉璃厂,可他也叹惋"在不久的将来,这些店铺都会消失"。正因为此,老舍先生在北京新时代的舞台上,努力创造着新北京的语言和形象,创造着新北京的符号。 于是,作为北京符号发现者、热爱者和创造者的老舍先生,也成为了

高考英语满分作文赏析背诵佳选

一.用词准确;表达地道 【北京卷】【试题回放】第一节情景作文(20分) 美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文,经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华,请给Jeff写一封信,按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。 注意:1. 信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于60。 Dear Jeff, I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing. While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school t ogether by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun. If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience. Best wishes, Li Hua [名师点评]

高考英语满分作文精选

高考英语满分作文精选(2) 2018-02-09 【译文】 中国旅游 最近几年,在中国的趋势,旅游业增长较快。根据最近的一项调查显示一些专家认为,约47%城镇居民定期作出旅行,28%的农村居民,也使他们的全国巡演。该调查还显示,更多的人在旅游有兴趣,并会在将来加入军队。 面对这一趋势,我们不能不说是负责任的开发一些潜在因素。在第一个地方,随着改革开放政策,对中国人民的生活水平有了很大提高,因此,他们大多数都不能周游。更重要的是,它相信,人们现在更积极的态度,旅游业,把它作为一种生活方式。此外,旅游设施正在变得越来越好。例如,交通运输发展迅速,许多景点都已经上市。 高考英语满分作文精选四 【例文】 Olympics and I Dear friend, I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness. This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What’s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it’s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded.

高考英语满分作文精选6篇

请根据以下提示,以Advertisement为标题,写一篇词左右的英语短文. 广告成了人们生活中不可或缺的点缀 有的广告走向极端 你对广告的看法 Possible version: Advertisement广告 Advertisements appear everywhere in modern society. When you walk along the streets, you can see large boards with pretty girls smiling at you. You read newspapers, and see half of the pages covered with ads. You turn on TV, and you see commercial advertisements again. Whether you like it or not, advertisements fill your life. 广告在现代社会中无处不在。当你走在街上,你可以看到大的董事会与漂亮的女孩在你微笑。你看报纸,看到有一半的网页上覆盖着广告。你打开电视,你看到商业广告。不管你喜欢不喜欢,广告填满你的生活。 In order to attract more customers, advertisements will sometimes go to extremes. Advertisements use every possible means in producing their announcements. For example, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will employ an actor to sit at a table and eat up their seemingly delicious food product while they film him. 为了吸引更多的顾客,广告有时会走向极端。广告在制作公告的过程中使用各种可能的手段。举例来说,要做广告,广告主会雇用一位演员坐在一张桌子上,吃上他们在电影中的美味食物。 Although advertisements enable you to make decisions quickly, sometimes they can cause lots of trouble. There are always many of them and they make you forget what you are sitting there for. 虽然广告让你快速做出决定,但有时他们会给你带来很多麻烦。他们中有很多人,他们让你忘记你坐在那里的。 春天是旅游的好季节,某外国语学校校长要求各班同学就春游一事展开讨论.讨论的主题是:学校要不要组织学生春游.校长还要求班长就讨论的情况用英语写一封信给他. 假定你是某班班长李华,请你根据下列表格中的信息客观地介绍讨论情况. 注意:1,信的格式已为你写好;2,词数:100左右;3,生词:拓宽broaden 70%的学生赞成春游 30%的学生反对春游 1. 可以领略大自然的优美风景; 2. 拓宽视野,增长知识; 3. 呼吸新鲜空气,有益于身体健康. 1. 时间紧,耽误学习; 2. 增加父母经济负担; 3. 担心安全. Dear Headmaster, I’m writing to tell you the discussion we’ve had on whether the school should organize a spring outing for the students. 范文 Dear Headmaster,

高考材料素材满分作文范文

高考材料素材满分作文范文 高考中的作文其实也不会很难写,但是也要考平时积累的一些材料。给大家精心推荐历年高考中写作需要的一些材料作文,希望能够对您有所帮助! 高考材料作文篇一:温柔与倔强人的心中总有一些坚硬的东西,也有一些柔软的东西,如何对待它们,将关系到能否造就和谐的自我。 也许每个人都是双重的性格,有活泼有感伤,有温柔有倔强。 一个人内心是需要坚硬的,在这个弱肉强食的当代,风情万种的林黛玉本就难以生存,薛宝钗那样雷厉风行的人才可以独当一面。这个发展迅猛的社会,竞争不断压力不减,你不坚强,脆弱根本没人管。受了委屈,对新环境的不适应,工作的不顺利等等,都需要自己慢慢消化,外面不会有人宠你照顾你,这个时候不坚强,不让自己变得坚硬起来,便只有淘汰的份,即使淘汰,也不会有人给你半分怜悯半分同情,在这个社会,能依靠的也只有自己,都市里的生活与竞争,已经远远超越人们承受的极限,前段时间往上特别流行的一句话说,不管晚上经历了怎样的泣不成声,明日醒来世界依然车水马龙。没人管你背后的辛酸与无辜,没人会管你内心的挣扎与无助。在此种境地,你不坚强,脆弱给谁看?哭几声是不是一起哦饿问题都可以迎刃而解?当然不

可能,这个社会,也正是因为有这些坚强的人们的存在,才日益快速发展起来。 然而,一个人坚强的久了,生活似乎慢慢就会演变成一种机械化,机械的上班,搭乘公交地铁,下班回家,吃饭,睡觉,一切索然无味,寡淡的几乎将人逼疯。这个时候,你还会因为听到一首好歌感动的热泪盈眶吗?你还会跟着电影里主人公命运的起承转折或哭或笑吗?上班的路上看到活泼的小学生们蹦蹦跳跳的手拉着手上学,还会不自觉的露出欣慰爱怜的微笑吗?如果你还会,说明你内心还温柔着,你的生活没有被这种所谓的都市规则彻底掩盖。因为温柔,会为一只猫感动,会为一只鸟驻足,辛苦繁杂的生活过后,偶尔还能享受生活的浪漫,于是一切就不会只是枯燥无聊,会发现这个世界是有童话存在的。 每个人都想尽力过得好,开心一点,无忧无虑一点,单纯一点。无所谓温柔也无所谓倔强,一个人呆着时,听点音乐打发一下时间,悠扬的旋律缓缓围绕自己,投入整个身心去感受去体会音乐里的世界。静静的感受自己的世界,与朋友聚在一起时,跟着大家伙起哄热闹叫嚣,仿佛生命就在于这样疯狂的折腾,乐此不疲。 从朋友那里听过这样一句话,说,有时候一句话就能让我们泪流满面,有时候也发现自己咬着牙走了很远的路。

相关文档
相关文档 最新文档