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深圳中考英语作文--模拟训练

深圳中考英语作文--模拟训练
深圳中考英语作文--模拟训练

深圳中考复习写作专项训练

Topic One: A letter to a friend

英国女孩Jenny想在中国找一位笔友。请你根据表格中的内容, 以李洋的名义给Jenny写一封80词左右的信。信的开头与结尾已给出, 不计入要求词数, 内容可适当发挥。

Name Li Yang

Age 13

Family father, mother and I

Favourite hobbies swimming and skating

Other favourite things Green and yellow, rice and dumplings, dogs and birds

其他内容: 1.your age, height, appearance (年龄,身高,外貌) 2. your hobbies (爱好)

3. your family and your home (家庭) 5. your dream (梦想)

Dear Jenny,

How are you? I am glad to make friends with you. Let me introduce myself at first. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,

Li Yang

Topic two: A day in the life of someone / Our daily life

假设你是Paul,请根据提示,以“Sunday of Paul’s family”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。

提示:

1.星期天的早上,保罗一家人起的都很早。

2.平时爸爸妈妈工作太忙,没有吃过早餐,但在星期天的早晨会吃。

3.吃过早饭后,一家人去了教堂,在那里遇到很多人。

4.然后去了公园,在公园里划船,在树下吃午餐,午餐后保罗和弟弟汤姆一起放风筝,爸爸妈妈一起钓鱼,下

午在草坪上玩耍,一天都在公园里度过了美好的时光。

5.傍晚时分,一家人乘坐公交车回到自己家中,虽然很累但觉得非常快乐。

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Topic three: Writing a diary

假如你是Judy, 昨天是你的生日,你跟朋友一起在一个饭店吃饭,席间,朋友们分别给你赠送了他们的礼物。这时一对穿着破烂的爷孙俩也走过来,他们看上去很穷,老人提出要小孩给你唱生日歌,而你们给他们一点点食物作为回礼。你同意了。事后有朋友认为他们是骗子,你却觉得能够帮助别人是一件很快乐的事情。回家以后,你在日记中记下了自己这个难忘的生日。请写完Judy的日记,日记的开头已经给出,字数不少于80词。要求以上内容

全部要包含在内。

11th, May Sunday Rainy

Today was my birthday. I was very happy to have dinner with my friends tonight.

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Topic four: A plan for activities

假设你们学校准备在这个周六举行一次郊游活动。请你根据表格内容, 以九年级一班班长Tom的名义写一则通知, 告知全班同学郊游的活动安排。

A trip to Shenzhen Fairylake Botanic Garden

8:00 am Meet at the gate of the garden

8:00 am – 11:00 am Visit the Gate, the Fairyland

12:00 am Have lunch

1:00 pm Visit the Lake and the Temple areas, play games

5:00 pm Return home

Topic five: Traveling

假如你是一名游客,请你根据所给的提示以My trip to Shenzhen为题写一篇短文,记录你在深圳的所见所闻。要求不少于80词,介绍一些深圳出名的景色,特色食物,以及简单地谈一下你的感受。

Topic six: Environment

假如你们学校要开展“保护环境,美化校园”活动,请根据提示信息写一篇倡议书,号召大家为保护环境做出贡献。要求:80词左右(短文开头已经给出,不计入总次数)

内容:1. 简单地说明校园内的不文明现象,比如乱扔垃圾。

2. 提出倡议,要爱护花草树木,不乱扔垃圾

3. 拒绝使用塑料袋

4. 节约水电,提倡骑车或者步行上学

Our school is like our home. We must protect the environment in our school and make it more beautiful. ______________________________________________________________________

Topic seven: Making rules

假如你是一家电影院的经理,现在老板要求你给电影院来的客人制定一些规则。

1. 不能带吃的东西进来

2. 不要大声讲话

3. 不要做错座位

4. 请把手机声音关掉

5. 请不要随便扔垃圾。

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Topic eight: Health

现如今,中学生课业任务繁重,学生忙于学习而少了体育锻炼,导致他们的身体素质每况愈下,这种现状很令家长担心。假如你是一名教育工作者,请给学生们做一个演讲,给一些有关的建议。

1.多做运动,参加如足球,跑步等运动。

2.吃健康饮食,比如蔬菜水果,少吃油炸食品和快餐食物。

3.保持充足的睡眠和快乐的心情。

4.不要吸烟,饮酒。

要求:不要逐字翻译,适当发挥想象。不少于80词。

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Topic nine: Festival

假如你叫李华,5月11日母亲节哪天,你为母亲做了很多有意义的事情,请根据表格李的信息,完成下面一篇日记。上午用零花钱给妈妈买了一些花

下午去市场买菜,为一家人做了一顿简单而可口的饭菜

晚饭后送贺卡,告诉妈妈要注意身体健康,不要过度劳累,保证今后为妈妈做一些家务

事,妈妈感动得流泪

11th, May Sunday Rainy

Today is Mother’s Day.

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Topic ten: A story of a successful person

假如你们学校举办英语作文竞赛,请你根据下面的资料,用英语讲述一下李月的故事。

李月喜欢画画,酷爱芭蕾舞。在四川地震中,11岁的她被埋在废墟中70多个小时,失去了左腿。然而在人们的关心和鼓励下,她又重新站了起来,并在2008年残奥会开幕式中表演了芭蕾舞。

要求:题目自拟,语句通顺,段落分明,60词左右。

参考词汇:the Paralympics 残奥会;the opening ceremony 开幕式;save 挽救;earthquake地震;rubble 碎石;ballet 芭蕾舞

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Topic eleven: Places of interest

假如你是韩冰,你的英国笔友Bob想让你介绍家乡济南的情况,请根据下面的提示,用英语写一封电子邮件发给他。

位于山东的中西部,是山东的省会;周围群山怀抱。

以72泉(spring)而闻名,又被称为“泉城”,趵突泉(the Baotu Spring)被誉为“天下第一泉”。

有2000多年的历史,马可·波罗(Marco Polo)曾到过济南并对济南大家称赞。

是著名的旅游城市,这里的人民很好客。

要求:不少于100词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Bob,

I’m very happy to have received your e-mail. Now let me tell you______________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________

So welcome to Jinan and enjoy yourself here if you have time!

Yours,

Han Bing

Topic twelve: Eating habits

健康的饮食习惯对我们的生活有很大的影响,请简单地说明一下健康的饮食习惯。要吃干净健康的食物,各种食物都应该涉及,要按时吃饭,饮食要规律,这样,我们才能有一个健康的体魄。要求:字数不少于80词。

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Topic thirteen: Traffic

交通安全对我们的生活有着重大的影响。每年都有很多人因为交通事故而失去宝贵的生命。作为学生,请谈一谈我们应该遵守哪些重要的交通规则。如何通过做到这些来保障自己的生命安全。内容提要:1.骑车或者乘车上学要注意安全2. 过马路要按照规则来,不要东张西望。要求:不少于80词,不要逐字翻译,可以适当发挥。

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Topic fourteen: Social communication

假如你是李丽,你校开展了一个题为“Smiling can make our life better”的英语作文比赛,请按要求写一篇短文。要点包括:

1.“微笑”的作用

2.“微笑”带给你生活的变化

3. 提出“大家应该多微笑”的倡议

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Topic fifteen: Writing about a graph

假如你叫张华,参加了你校举办的“有烦恼向谁说?”的调查活动(a survey),下表是调查的结果。请根据表格提示,用英语给某报社编辑写一封信,说明情况并提出自己的观点,同时征求一下他们的意见。

调查人数的百分比诉说对象理由

60%的学生同学、朋友年龄相仿,容易交流和被理解

30%的学生老师、家长经验丰富,可以得到满意的帮助

10%的学生自己不愿与人交流,很难与人相处

Dear editor,

I am a middle school student. Recently we have made a survey---“To whom do you go when in trouble?” here are the results. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________

范文:

Topic one: A letter to a friend

Dear Jenny,

How are you? I am glad to make friends with you. Let me introduce myself at first.

I am Li Yang. I am thirteen years old. There are three people in my family, my father, my mother and me. My favourite colours are green and yellow.

I like rice and dumplings best. My favourite animals are dogs and birds. They are my friends. I don’t like western food at al l.

I don’t like pop music, either.

What do I love to do? I love sports. My favourite hobbies are swimming and skating. Do you like me? Write soon.

Yours,

Li Yang

Topic two: A day in the life of someone / Our daily life

Sunday of Paul’s family

The Pauls get up very early on Sundays. Usually Paul’s father and mother ar e busy working so they never eat breakfast in the morning. But on Sundays they often have a big breakfast. After breakfast they go to church first. They meet a lot of people in the church. Then they go to the park. In the park, they go boating on the lake. Then they sit under the trees and have their picnic. After lunch Paul and his brother fly kite and Mr. and Mrs. Paul go fishing. In the afternoon, the children play on the grass and they spend almost the whole day there. Towards evening, they come back home by bus. Though they feel a little tired, they all have a good time today.

Topic three: Writing a diary

11th, May Sunday Rainy

Today was my birthday. I was very happy to have dinner with my friends tonight. During the dinner, my friends gave me their present. They were so sweet and I felt on top of the world. Just then, an old man, with a little boy came over to us. They wore old clothes and looked very poor. The old man offered to sing a birthday song for me by his little grandson. At the same time he wished that we could give his young boy some food. I thought it was nice to help poor people. After they sang the song for me, I gave them some food and they walked away. However, some of my friends thought they were just liars and they were not worth helping. Actually, I felt so good when I gave them a hand. What an unforgettable day!

Topic four: A plan for activities

A trip to Shenzhen Fairylake Botanic Garden

May I have your attention, please? We are going to have a school trip this coming Saturday. We will visit Shenzhen Fairylake Botanic Garden from 8:00 am to 3:00 pm. We will go there by bus.

At 8:00 am, we are going to meet at the gate of the garden. Then we will visit the Gate, the Fairyland. We are going to learn more about different kinds of plants. We would like all of you to bring your own food and drinks. At 12:00, we will have lunch together. At about 1:00 pm, we are going to visit the Lake and the Temple areas. The Lake is so attractive that we can stay there for a bit longer time. Then we are going to visit some famous and great temples. We will get ready to return home at 5:00pm..

Would you like to join us? If you want to come, please contact us.

Topic five: Traveling

Shenzhen is an international city. It is in southern China. I went to Shenzhen to spend my holiday in February. As a tourist destination, Shenzhen attracts millions of visitors each year. Its pleasant seashore and forests make people feel fresh, and it is called as “International Garden City”. I enjoyed my trip. I arrived in Shenzhen on February 2nd. The next day, I went to Window of the World. It was a wonderful place. I saw many buildings from all over the world. They were much were much smaller than the real ones. I also went to the Happy Valley. It was a good place to relax. I went to Dongmen for shopping. I bought a lot of things and they were cheap. Besides, there were all kinds of food and snacks from all over China. I think Shenzhen is a great city in China. It is such an impressive city that I can’t forget the moments I spent here

Topic six: Environment

Our school is like our home. We must protect the environment in our school and make it more beautiful. But nowadays, some students don’t realize that they do harm to our school. For example, some students throw rubbish everywhere, or empty bottles on the ground. I think we should take actions now.

First, we should take care of the trees and flowers in our school. We’d better not step on the grass or hurt the trees and flowers. And don’t throw trash here and there. Put it into the trash box. If you find any trash on the ground, please pick it up and throw it into a nearby trash box. Second, we should not use plastic bags any more, since they are harmful to our environment. Third, please save water and electricity. Remember to turn off lights when you leave classrooms and the taps after washing your hands. Besides, we’d better walk to school or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Let’s work together to make our school better.

Topic seven: Making rules

Welcome to our cinema. We have some rules, please obey them.

First, you'd better not eat or drink in the cinema. Second, you shouldn’t speak loudly. Third, if you really want to eat or drink something, please don’t throw them her e and there. Fourth, please don’t use your mobile phone,and you’d better turn it off. Fifth, please sit on your own seat, don’t sit wrongly. Sixth, don’t stand up, because you may keep others out.

Hope you have a good time.

Topic eight: Health

All work and no play will make you dull and weak. As students, you should do exercise to keep healthy. Here are some ideas for you.

First, you should do more exercise every day. Take part in all kinds of sports, such as swimming, football and jogging. Second, you must eat more fruits and green vegetables. Don’t eat those fried or fast food. They are bad for your health. Third, it is important for us to get enough sleep. Sleep helps you have energy. You should also keep being happy and active all the time. Last but not least, never learn to smoke or drink.

Topic nine: Festival

Today is Mother’s Day. I love mother so much that I have done many things for her.

In the morning, I bought some flowers with my pocket money and put them in a vase. In the afternoon, I went to the market to buy some vegetables and later cooked a simple but delicious dinner for my family. After supper, I gave mother the card that I’ve made for my mother and said “ Happy Mother’s Day.” . Then I told her to pay more attention to her health and not to overwork. I also promised to help her do some housework. Hearing these words, Mother was moved to tears.

Today is a special day, warm and meaningful.

Topic ten: A story of a successful person

A Girl with a Dream

Li Yue, an 11-year-old girl, lost her let leg in the earthquake in Sichuan in 2008. People saved her after she was in the rubble for over 70 hours. Li Yue is a pretty girl who loves dancing and painting. She loves ballet best. After the earthquake, with many people’s help, she stood up again her dream of dancing came true again. At last, she got the chance to show her beautiful dancing to the whole world at the opening ceremony of the 2008 Paralympics.

Li Yue is really brave. We should learn from her.

Topic eleven: Places of interest

Dear Bob,

I’m very happy to have received your e-mail. Now let me tell you something about my hometown Jinan, the capital of Shandong province. It is located in the Midwest of Shandong. And there are lots of hills around it. When talking about Jinan, I can’t help thinking of its famous 72 springs. The Baotu Spring is called “The First Spring of the World”. Thanks to its famous springs, Jinan is known as “The City of Springs”.

Jinan is a city with a long history of more than 2000 years, Marco Polo once visited Jinan and let words of praise to this city. What’s more, Jinan is also a famous tourist city. And its friendly people receive many tourists from all over the world every day.

So welcome to Jinan and enjoy yourself here if you have time!

Yours,

Han Bing

Topic twelve: Eating habits

Healthy eating is important for us in our daily life. Food can give us energy and help us build up our body. What and how should we eat to be healthier? First, we should have enough clean food each meal. Second, it’s import ant to keep a balanced diet. Different kinds of food provide us different nutrition we need every day. Third, we should have a regular meal. In this way, we’ll be strong and healthy, and we’ll do well in our study.

Topic thirteen: Traffic

Every year, a number of people lose their lives because terrible traffic accidents. As students, we should pay more attention to the traffic safety.

If we walk or ride the bikes to school, we need to know rules that will help keep us safe while we are coming to and from school. First, we should be careful when we are walking or riding a bike. We shouldn’t play at the same time. Second, we should use the zebra crossings to cross the road. When we go by bike, we should get off and walk with the bikes instead of riding them across the road. Third, we should cross the road or street only when the traffic light is green.

We must obey traffic rules strictly so that we can have a nice and safe life every day.

Topic fourteen: Social communication

As we all know, smiling can make our life become better. There are many good points of smiling.

On the one hand, smiling can not only make us happy, but also please others. If you always smile at life, life will smile at us in return. On the other hand, you also will be much more active than before. You can find a different world if you often smile. What’s more, smiling can make you have more friends.

Once I was such a shy girl that I seldom talked with people, or took part in school activities and I didn’t share my joy with my classm ates. And I didn’t share my joy with my classmates. One day I decided to smile at my classmates. And I received beautiful smiles in reture. Now I have become more and more active and have made more friends. I am happier than before. So let’s greet people w ith smile!

Topic fifteen: Writing about a graph

I am a middle school student. Recently we have made a survey---“To whom do you go when in trouble?”here are the results. Sixty percent students will go to their classmates or friends when they have trouble, because they are almost of the same age. They can talk with and understand each other easily. Thirty percent students will tell their teachers or parents about their problems as they have rich experience and they are helpful. Only ten percent solve their problems by themselves. They hate to talk with others and can’t get on well with other people, either. They have few friends. I think we’d better ask our teachers, parents, classmates and friends for help when we are in trouble. Could you tell me your ideas about it? I am looking forward to your answer.

Yours Sincerely,

Zhang Hua

2016深圳中考英语作文方向

深圳中小学生八大素养 1、品德素养提升:坚定理想信念、弘扬传统美德、培养文明行为、传承深圳精神。 2、身心素养提升:增强学生体质、促进心理健康、培育健全人格。 3、学习素养提升:培养学习兴趣、提升学习能力、养成学习习惯。 4、创新素养提升:营造校园文化、创新教育模式、创新人才培养机制。 5、国际素养提升:理解多元文化、扩大国际交往、参与国际竞争与合作。 6、审美素养提升:提升审美品位、丰富美育形式、营造艺术氛围。 7、信息素养提升:推广 IT 课堂运用、推进网络学习、践行网络文明。 8、生活素养提升:学会安全生活、学会自主生活、学会低碳生活。 类型一:描述某社会/校园现象--你的看法--你认为应该怎么做Question 1 What ’s the topic? 文章的主题是什么?(一句总起句) Question 2 现在社会/校园有什么现象?(一般题目里面会有中文提示,翻译即可。不要一字一句翻译) Question 3 What’s your opinion? 你的看法是什么?(一句话确定观点) And what’s your suggestions?你的建议做法是什么?(一般 3 个建议的做法)

范文1: R efuse to be Phubbers(低头族) With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used by people. Phubbers can be seen everywhere. While eating with family or friends, some people are always busy playing with their smart phones. It has bad effects on the relationship with their relatives and friends. Even worse, when some people cross the street, drive a car or work, they still concentrate on their mobile phones, which can easily cause traffic accidents. It’s very d angerous. Other teenagers stay up playing games. I think it does great harm to their health as well as study and work. In my opinion, we’d better make good use of smartphones. Don't focus on them too much. I do believe that face-to-face conversations will bring us more pleasure than Let's raise our heads and refuse to be phubbers 该作文题采用整体印象评分法。 内容要点: ①开头--大家都用手机,很多人成为了低头族给1分 ②低头族的现象给3分③低头族的弊端给3分④考 生的观点和建议给5分 ⑤条理清楚,语句通顺,无标点,单词拼写及语法错误,书面整洁,给3分。类型二:描述某社会/校园现象--你的看法--你的理由Question 1 What ’s the topic? 文章的话题是什么?(一句总起句) Question 2 现在社会/校园有什么现象?(一般题目会有中文提示,翻译即可。不要一字一句翻译) Question 3 What’s your opinion? 你的观点是什么?(一句话确定观点) And what’s your suggestions?你的观点的理由是什么?(一般 1--2 个理由,看字数分布)

初中英语作文万能模板

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