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2007年-2013年深圳中考英语作文真题分析及范文

2007年-2013年深圳中考英语作文真题分析及范文
2007年-2013年深圳中考英语作文真题分析及范文

2007年—2013年广东中考英语书面表达真题

2007年:

新闻:6月5日是联合国世界环境日,今年的主题是“冰川消融,后果堪忧”。为了避免可能造成巨大灾难的气候改变,联合国环境规划署组织了“Planting Trees for the Earth”大型活动。许多国家和地区积极响应。

以上新闻播出后,你学校决定组织一次植树活动。假设你是班长,你要动员你班同学参加这次活动,请完成你的发言稿。(要求:写在答题卷上,从一个或几个方面说明树对环境的影响,不用翻译上面的新闻,60—80字。

________________________________________________________________________________ 范文:

Planting Trees for the Earth

Dear fellow students,

As we all know, trees are important. The reasons are as follows.

First of all,trees can take carbon dioxide and other harmful gases from the air and release oxygen into the air. Besides, They can cool the air and make our cities less noisy. What’s more, They can keep the water and stop the soil from being washed away. Finally, Trees can prevent the climate from getting warmer and warmer. In a word, They can keep the balance of nature. Without trees, humans and animals would die. So we must do our best to plant more trees and take good care of them.

In order to protect our environment, our school is planning an activity “Planting Tr ees for the Earth”. If you want to live in a more beautiful and healthier world, why not join us in the activity together?

That’s all. Thank you.

2008年:

假如你是Carl,是一位初三(3)班的学生,即将结束初中阶段的学习生活。请你用英文给你的老师写一封信,表示感谢和祝福。60-80个字。

要求:1. 可以列举事例;

2. 条理清楚,连贯,语句通顺,标点正确;

3. 信中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。

________________________________________________________________________________ 范文:

Dear Mr. Liu,

How is everything going with you? I’m writing to tell you something about my feelings for you. I really want to thank you. The reasons are as follows.

First of all,you are a very responsible English teacher. When I began learning English, I worried about my English very much because my pronunciation was very poor. Then you not only offered me many suggestions to improve it, but also corrected pronunciation mistakes for me. Besides, when I was ill last summer, you sent me to the hospital immediately and took care of me all night. Finally, you often cheered me up when I didn’t do well in my exam.

In a word, I’d like t o thank all the help that you have given me. Wish you a healthy and happy life.

Yours sincerely,

Carl

假设你是Doctor Li, 请你用英文写一篇发言稿,从作息、饮食、运动、卫生习惯等方面谈谈如何预防甲型H1N1流感。要求:至少包含3点建议

How to Defend the H1N1 Swine Flu Virus

Ladies and gentlemen:

Hello, everyone. I’m Doctor Li, The Swine Flu virus detected in Mexico is the H1N1 Swine Flu Virus strain that has killed more than 152 people in Mexico.

________________________________________________________________________________

Doctor Li. 范文:

How to Defend the H1N1 Swine Flu Virus

Ladies and gentlemen:

Hello, everyone. I’m Doctor Li. The Swine Flu virus, detected in Mexico is the H1N1 Swine Flu Virus strain that has killed more than 152 people in Mexico.

As we all know,it is difficult for us to fight against the H1N1 Swine Flu Virus. However,as long as we do our best to stay away from some unhealthy habits, we can defend the disease.

So how to defend the H1N1 Swine Flu virus ? First of all, we should get enough sleep. For middle school students, we should have eight or nine hours’ sleep. Besides, we must do our best to eat more healthy food like fruit and vegetables. What’s more, we had better do more exercise to keep healthy. We can run, play ball games and so on.Finally, we should keep the air clean in the room and try not to go to public places where there are many people. If we have a fever, we need to see a doctor.

In a word, if we have good habits, it will be difficult for us to get the disease. Why not work together to prevent the H1N1 flu? Thank you!

Doctor Li

2010年:

假如你们学校校报举行英语征文活动,主题是“我心目中的成功人士”,请你写一篇文章介绍一位你心目中的成功人士(可以使你身边熟悉的人或名人)。

文章必须包含以下内容:1. 人物简介;2. 人物事迹;3. 给你的启发。(共1题,10分)要求:1. 条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确、逻辑清晰;

2. 假如写的是你身边的人物,文中不能呢个出现真实的姓名和校名;

3. 80词左右。

________________________________________________________________________________ 范文:

A Successful Person in My Mind

The most successful person in my mind is My father. My father was born in America and he has made great success in his life. He is an artist. I think my father is very successful. The reasons are as follows.First of all, when he was 30 years old, he won a big prize in an art competition. Besides, at the age of 40, he took part in a famous painting meeting. He is not only successful in his career but also in his life. we are always very happy because he cares about my family all the time.

In a word, from my father’s experience, I can learn from my father that it is never too old to fight for your dreams.

假如你是Richard,今天是父亲节,请给爸爸写一封信。

信的内容必须包括如下两点:

1.表达对爸爸的祝福与感谢;

2.给出至少两个理由说服爸爸同意你每天打半小时的篮球。

要求:1. 信中不得出现真实校名和姓名;

2. 条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确;

3. 60—80个单词;信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Dad,

Today is Fa ther’s Day. _________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________

Yours, Richard

范文:

Dear Dad,

Today is Father’s Day. I am writing to tell you something about my feelings for you. First of all, I want to thank you for everything you have done for me. Besides, I’d like to say something about my study. I know you are worried about my study, so you don’t want me to p lay basketball too much. However, I really think it is necessary for me to play basketball everyday. The reasons are as follows.

First of all, I can’t study all day long. Sometimes I need to relax. Besides,I really enjoy playing basketball. It keeps me healthy. Could you allow me to play basketball for half an hour every day? I promise I will try my best in my study.

In a word, I love you so much. I hope you are happy and healthy every day.

Yours,

Richard

2012年:

为了节能环保及方便出行,提高生活质量,深圳市政府近年来在很多地段为市民免费提供自行车服务,但部分市民对此了解不够。假如你是一位志愿者,周日上午,你来到莲花山公园对市民进行自行车借用宣传。请根据以下提示写出一篇演讲稿。

提示:1. 深圳市民可以在很多地方免费借用自行车,非常方便;

2. 如果借用自行车,请注意爱惜,并及时归还;

3. 希望大家多骑车出行。

(请至少列出骑车出行的两点好处。)

要求:1. 演讲稿内容必须包括以上提示,可适当发挥;

2. 表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;

3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;写一篇80字左右的演讲稿。演讲稿的开头和

结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:resident, convenient, low-carbon, advantage

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen!

May I have your attention, please? I'm glad to tell you something about using bikes for free in Shenzhen.

________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your listening. Have a nice weekend!

范文:

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! May I have your attention, please? I’m a volunteer. I’m glad to tell you something about using bikes for free in Shenzhen.

As we all know, environment pollution and energy waste have become some of the most important topics in this world. It is very necessary for us to make good use of free bikes all round the city because Shenzhen is such a crowded city. The reasons are as follows.

First of all, It is obviously convenient if we ride a free bike in a traffic jam. Besides, if we use bikes in the city instead of the cars, our air will be cleaner. However, when you make a decision to use free bike service, please take care of the bike and return it on time. Remember, riding a bike is not only good for our city, but also for your health.

Thank you for your listening. Have a nice weekend!

2013年:

假设你是李明,上周日,你和家人去世界之窗游玩,一路上你见到了一些不文明的现象:有人违反交通规则;有人乱扔垃圾;还有人在公共场合吸烟。作为深圳人,你深刻地意识到:文明深圳,需要大家共同努力。请你写一篇日记。

内容:1. 记录当天的所听所闻;

2. 抒发你的感受,表达你的观点;

3. 列举至少三种文明行为。

要求:1. 表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。

参考词汇:违反交通规则break traffic rules 公共场合public rules 文明的civilized

行为behavior(参考词汇仅供参考,不要求都用上)

Sunday, 16 June Today I went to the Window World with my family. On my way, _______________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 范文:

Last weekend, our class paid a visit to the Window of the World. As one of the most famous scenic spots in Shenzhen, it is well-received by tourists. However,some uncivilized behavior occurs frequently, such as throwing rubbish away, destroying the facilities and running a traffic light. As far as I am concerned, we must do our best to make Shenzhen a civilized city. The suggestions are as follows.

First of all, a stronger environmental awareness is needed among people. It's important to set more signs around to remind tourists of this. What's more, series of regulations to punish the bad behavior should be carried out practically. Finally, we middle school students can be volunteers to lead the tourists behave well through many public activities.

In a word, as citizens of Shenzhen, we should do anything that we can do to make Shenzhen more attractive.

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