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深圳中考英语作文(结构篇)

2020深圳中考作文课（结构篇）

中考作文结构（四类）

一、Story&People 写故事或者人物（写人一般都是有简短事件提

示），这种在深圳中考作文中出现的比较少，写作过程中要注意的事情是：

1）这类作文需体现人文精神且有时涉及个人切身经历，所以需要语言要有感染力(表示情绪的词freezing cold，boiling hot, I’m totally freak out比喻拟人手法as if, like, as..as.，Suddenly，Fortunately,感叹句…）题目比较开放或提示点较少，自己补充细节。

2）写故事一般是按照时间顺序，所以时间连接词和时间状语，分词做状语（Then，Later，As..当，As soon as, the moment…）

所有的作文我都推荐用5个句群法打框架

1. 第一个句群：第一句直接说时间，第二句说事情。这个开头如果写一个80字到100字的中考记叙文写的非常不合理，因为15字用完还没开始进入正题。

1）It was on 5th May last year(时间的排序从小到大，而且具体几月几日不能last) that I experienced the most unforgettable

day of my life（强调句型）.

2）This was the day before the end of our fencing trip in Harbin.

2. 按照时间顺序开始展开故事，故事起因

1）In the morning, we ended up with the second in our group, accumulating(积累，其他替换getting／having/也可以直接不用)30 wins/gains and 28 losses/defeats( 逗号后面可以用名词／形容词短语做插入语进行进一步的解释说明，像蒙娜丽莎那篇课文一样。

Mona Lisa, one of the most famous paintings in the world ,is painted by ....)

2），and we were fairly proud with this result.(两个句子的主语谓语一样显的句式不够灵活，拖沓。选择以下几种方法替换，优先选用前面的

1)并列句/从句／分词结构with结构连接起来，语法不好的同学先用并列和状语宾语从句。

2)主语用代词／名词短语替换主语, 或者放大（I－We）缩小转移主语（这种方法很好用，这个例文后面都有举例）

3) 用It is/There be/感叹祈使或者其他句型

4）把宾语提前，做被动语态

此外very 和so 用slightly，a little bit/ fairly, rather/ extremely, highly, greatly替换）

3. 经过

这位同学意识到了句式结构重复的问题，所以生硬写了一个错误的被动语态，而且犯了最低级的名词不可数的毛病（宁可结构单一，也不能犯简单的语法和拼写错误）这种情况就用刚才说到的技巧状语从句穿起来两个句子, 或者巧妙的放大缩小转移主语。

1）To /In order to celebrate（目的状语）our victory, our

coach/instructor decided to the majority of(most／lots of／a lot of) team members(my teammates) decided to ........treat us with a big meal.

把我们改成了我们的教练，我们中的大部分团队成员，这就是转移放大或者缩小主语的一种技巧，很适合不会写从句的同学用。

2）加细节使得故事起承转合更加自然，为了庆祝胜利然后我们就选择去饱餐一顿，然后我们怎么为什么选择烧烤呢，英语作文一定要注意句子和句子之间的连接

Fortunately/ Luckily, a local guide向导/resident居民recommended 推荐／led/took/introduced带领us to a famous/popular but cheap/affordable实惠的barbecue restaurant/stall路边摊where I enjoyed the best/most delicious meat skewers(国际教材学的) I've ever had. 这个开头就用了副词，写故事这个很好用。也可以简单写到了一个流行的餐厅就行了。

4. 故事高潮和结尾

During the happy dinner, All teammates were chatting and laughing with each other cheerfully and everyone had a better understanding of the team spirit ( 避免使用we的技巧，换成所有队员，每个人)不要用due to 没有直接的因果关系。这个开头就用了介词短语，也可以用副词把两个句子隔开）

5. 故事的总结

最后一句让步从句用的很好

Although almost a year has passed, this memory is still fresh／clear in my mind as/for/because/since it has taught me a lesson about teamwork/ friendship/ success.

Sincerely hope all my teammates live a happy life now!

二、How型作文（让你提建议或者写一个计划，你准备怎么处理一

个问题，不需要你去说优缺点，看法或者原因，也不是个人经

历过的事情或者人）

这篇深圳中考作文真题所有要点都已经罗列出来，需要的单词也简单，成绩好的同学其实发挥空间有限，但是一些基础语法有问题的同学往往是单词和语法倒扣0.5地方太多，分数过低。尽量选择自己能够驾驭的词汇和句型，写的简洁流畅才是深圳中考作文拿高分的关键。

五句法

1.作文开头已经给出，直接写第一个要点。

I will buy some vegetable and meat with my mother so that we can make some traditional Chinese dishes for our guests.

/ My mother and I will…../ I will company my mother to buy some food ingredients ….

so that用的很好。但是为什么第一句很突兀的要写我和妈妈购物，感觉话没说完直接用to buy ..就好了。还犯了单复数错误，扣0.5，原材料用不可数。

2.第二个要点

As soon as/when they arrive, I will open the door immediately/as fast as possible and greet them with heartfelt welcome and a warm smile. Second是第一，第二，这里不合适，用Then或者不用更好，后面有时间状语，arrive比come也好。冠词缺失扣0.5

1.罗列要点，原因用1，2，3；说明步骤用first，next，then, after that，

afterwards；Finally，At last）；长议论文说明观点First of all, In addition, What’s more, Last but not least

3.第三个要点（两个方面）

1）After offering refreshments茶点／some tea and snacks, we would have a nice talk on the weather, special cuisine/food and places of interest in Shenzhen.

2）Meanwhile, I’m also want/long/eager to learn about the culture and life in their/foreign country.

show respect 很好但是respect 要接for them. while，keep eye contact也不错。

4. 第4个要点（交流，这是八下第二单元的内容）

During the talk/ While talking/communicating with them, I will keep necessary eye contact with them and pay attention to my body language/be courteous/polite.

5. 自己加一个亮点，当然可以不加，字数够了（根据课文，西方人和东方人的交流和眼神接触不一样）

It is best/better to find out/ask where they come from and do some research online in advance for/because different cultures have their own taboos／no-no禁忌/communication styles.

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