(完整word版)2007-2013年深圳中考英语作文题汇总,推荐文档

(2013) V. 书面表达（10 分）：

76.假设你是李明，上周日，你和家人去世界之窗游玩，一路上你见到了一些不文明的现象：有人违反交通规则；有人乱扔垃圾；还有人在公共场合吸烟。作为深圳人，你深刻地意

识到：文明深圳，需要大家共同努力。请你写一篇日记。

内容包括：1.记录当天的所听所闻；2.抒发你的感受，表达你的观点；3.列举至少三种文明行为。

要求：1.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。

参考词汇：违反交通规则break traffic rules 公共场合public rules 文明的civilized 行

为behavior（参考词汇仅供参考，不要求都用上）

Sunday, 16 June

Today I went to the Window World with my family. On my way,

(2012)V. 书面表达（10分）

为了节能环保及方便出行，提高生活质量，深圳市政府近年来在很多地段为市民免费提供自行车服务，但部分市民对此了解不够。假如你是一位志愿者，周日上午，你来到莲花山公园对市民进行自行车借用宣传。请根据以下提示写出一篇演讲稿。

提示：1. 深圳市民可以在很多地方免费借用自行车，非常方便；

2. 如果借用自行车，请注意爱惜，并及时归还；

3. 希望大家多骑车出行……（请至少列出骑车出行的两点好处。）

要求：1. 演讲稿内容必须包括以上提示，可适当发挥；

2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；

3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；写一篇80字左右的演讲稿。演讲稿的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：resident, convenient, low-carbon, advantage

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen!

May I have your attention, please? I'm glad to tell you something about using bikes for free in Shenzhen.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Thank you foryour listening. Have a nice weekend!

(2011)71. （共 1 题，10 分）

假如你是 Richard，今天是父亲节，请给爸爸写一封信。信的内容必须包括如下两点：

①表达对爸爸的祝福与感谢；②给出至少两个理由说服爸爸同意你每天打半小时的篮球。

要求：

⑴信中不得出现真实校名和姓名；

⑵条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；

⑶ 60-80个单词；信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Dad,

Today is Father’s Day.

Yours,

Richard

(2010)71. 假如你们学校校报举行英语征文活动，主题是“我心目中的成功人士”，请你写一篇文章介绍一位你心目中的成功人士（可以使你身边熟悉的人或名人）。文章必须包含以下内容：1. 人物简介；2. 人物事迹；3. 给你的启发。（共1题，10分）

要求：1）条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确、逻辑清晰；

2）假如写的是你身边的人物，文中不能呢个出现真实的姓名和校名；

3）80词左右。

(2009) 71、假设你是Doctor Li, 请你用英文写一篇发言稿，从作息、饮食、运动、卫生习惯等方面谈谈如何预防甲型H1N1流感。

要求：至少包含3点建议…….

How to Defend the H1N1 Swine Flu Virus

Ladies and gentlemen:

Hello, everyone. I’m Doctor Li, The Swine Flu virus detected in Mexico is the H1N1 Swine Flu Virus strain that has killed more than 152 people in Mexico….

Doctor Li.

(2008) VI. 书面表达（10分）

必须将答案写在答题卡背面非选择题答题区相应的序号内．（共1题）

71．假如你是Carl,是一位初三（3）班的学生，即将结束初中阶段的学习生活．请你用英文给你的老师写一封信，表示感谢和祝福．

要求：

(1)可以列举事例；(2)条理清楚，连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；(3)信中不得出现真实的校名

和姓名(4)60-80个字。

(2007)VI书面表达（共1小题，10分）

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以上新闻播出后，你学校决定组织一次植树活动。假设你是班长，你要动员你班同学参加这次活动，请完成你的发言稿。（要求：写在答题卷上，从一个或几个方面说明数对环境的影响，不用翻译上面的新闻，60——80字。）

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